A minor detail

“I need to tell you something”, David said.

“No! Don’t! I don’t need to know it!” She replied, with a tinge of impatience but not irritation.

Everything was just right. The night was cloudless and the breeze had no spite. The Trees ruffled their leaves egging them on. They were alone in the moonlight. The engine was turned off and the windows rolled down.

“Its important I tell you now. It could change everything! ”, David insisted. The hands held locked although David clenched his arms.

“Yes, it probably could. But I don’t want to hear it. Please.” She said slowly. Again, no irritation, but only anticipation…

“But…” He began when she interrupted him.

“Kiss me you fool!” She now commanded.

So he kissed her. He leaned over and kissed her. Under the moonlight, under the swaying trees and the very amiable breeze!

He kissed her in an Aston Martin that wasn’t his.

10 thoughts on “A minor detail

  • Alexandra: I suppose i cant find faults with hypothetical questions if my entire post was fiction. Yet, if you must ask then I really wonder what would have happened if She did hear what he had to say.

    If you must need an answer then as far as I know David would have told her what he had to. And then dependng on her reaction, He would do the needful.

    Anon: Ok. You should try shorter comments next time.

    Vani: So you still exist! Thanks.

    Aj: If I am the one with divided loyalties then dont I need the bigger heart. Here the car is only one of the details he leaves out.

  • 🙂

    actually I feel David wud hv never told her anything…if she hadnt understood herself, then it wud be tough to know whether the explaining was worth it or not…
    Doesnt David follow ‘signs’? I guess he does!

    Liked it…

  • okok..to be frank, i actually havnt gone through any of your posts yet..been SO long..yeah right, shame on me! but lifes sucking and spittin me out simultaneously..its jus whizzin past me! no time to breathe!! SIGH.

    anyway anyway, will be reading all the posts by tonight..pukka. hehe
    so how u been? will write you an email..so muchs happening! and we aint in touch!! how meaaan of ya!
    🙁 dooood, get in touch!! i need to tell u something..im sure you’r
    NOT gonna like it even one bit!!! 😛 😛 impish grin!

  • ok soo sigghhh. i cudnt resist!!

    im coming to canada! flippin true!! im coming to canada!!!! aaaaaaaaaaah!!! and i dont like that expression on your thobda one bit!! 😛 😛 😛

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